A Foreign World - Episode 7


I thought renpy was kidding me when it told me this update was only 6,800 words long. It certainly felt like more, and after all, the Google Doc where I wrote this update had about 8000 words. There must have been a mistake or something.

Or so I thought. After the guy who translates this game into simplified Chinese also only billed me for 6,800 words, I figured it out. Yes, the Google Doc was 8000 words long, but this also included all my comments on what's supposed to be happening on screen, with no text being shown. Things like '# The four of them on top of the slide' followed by '# Top down view of MC being the fastest, then Sue, then Monique, then Tracy'.

And, yes, those small prompts were approximately 1,000 words. So if you are not into reading... You probably shouldn't be here... But if you are here, and you are not into reading, this update might be a bit more for you than my others.

It's the beach episode, but without the beach. But you can see the girls in swimwear. I was also told that my renders have improved, judging by this update. I'd say I just relied a bit more on the bloom filter that Daz3d offers, but maybe that's an improvement.

Usually, I keep the text that comes along with the update short, but I do always feel compelled to write at least something.

So, I'll leave you to enjoy Episode 7. Have fun!

A Foreign World - Episode 7

Changelog:
+ 6,800 words of story
+ 302 renders
+ 9 animations
+ 0:40 hours of playtime

Total:
- 150,700 words of story
- 3,874 renders
- 111 animations
- 11:10 hours of playtime

Files

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Yo!

Here's some grammar errors I found.

Jack speaking to Sue at the water park:

Jack

‘Well, I would hate to ask Cecilia and Morris to get rid of it all the footage.’

This is a case of a couple of superfluous words. Theres a couple different ways to fix this up. My suggestion is:

 ‘Well, I would hate to ask Cecilia and Morris to get rid of the footage.’

At the slides when Jack is speaking to Megan the Pouty Girl:

Jack

‘Do you want to stay or do you go with Amber? If slides aren’t your favourite…’

This is a case of a couple of missing words. My suggestion is:

‘Do you want to stay or do you want to go with Amber? If the slides aren’t your favourite, consider checking out the hot tubs. They are more relaxing.’

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Quite a good content release other than that though. I enjoyed seeing Lucy put her best foot forward as it were.

I did notice there isn't much difference between Harem and Not-Harem though, just that Lucy shows up by herself to proposition Jack. I didn't notice any other differences.

Is it possible for the girls to notice that Jack hasn't accepted any of them? They have been trying one by one and they have all been knocked back and I think word should be spreading and hope should be flagging by now.

I think it would be good if at least one of them got frustrated and lost her temper with Jack, just saying. Or maybe Aurora might see the evidence and ask why Jack hasn't accepted any of her friends since she thinks he is suspicious.